Real World example II

AD from KSL.com on March 18, 2010:

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Layla is a 9 month old Border Collie-Lab puppy. She's beautiful, soft, playful, loving, and energetic. She's house trained, not aggressive, and she loves going to the dog park. We've had her around kids, babies, strangers, and other dogs - she's just as friendly with them as she is with us.
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Based on our handout, the ad may be stronger and more impressive to the readers if it is writen as:

Layla is a 9 month old Border Collie-Lab Puppy. She:

-is beautiful,
-is soft,
-is playful,
-is loving,
-is energetic,
-is house trained,
-is not aggressive, and
-loves going to the park!